That was a really good start...
It had a good length,
and you showed quite a bit of knowledge about flash: Motion tweening, tracebitmap, layers, and a few other of the basic things.
I really liked when he kicked the guy onto the tank, and it shot a chunk outta the wall with him.
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This was really long and boring, and really stupid. We all know that AOL sucks and will eventually destroy the entire human race, but you just made this thing go too long.
It was really, really bad.
Thanks for the tips, I'm sure that'll come in handy, PS I lick not suck.. w00t.
Well, that was odd...
The reason it was really good is that you actually tried on your first flash. Though you need to work on plot quite a bit and sound. Try some flash Tutorial websites, they'll help. Try to draw out the different things happening in story panel form, just so you know what you need to do to get it right.
Good work... but,
the jokes and stuff seemed a little too mild. Like, unfunny, coulda been better, you know!
The voices were well done and the drawing was great,
but you got kinda lazy on the animation of this.
12345iscool, that is spamming.
and with the movie,
I really didn't like it.
it was boring, had sound that blew my fucking eardrums to shit and looked like a fucking Garfield cartoon.
it was trying to be sad,
but it was really lightly colored,
and looked like a Gar-- oh wait,
I already said that.
AM I GOING TO DIE IN 7 DAYS NOW THAT I SAW THAT?!
das some fucked up shit right there
funny, but that could be better.
I was really dissapointed with the ending,
but in the middle of it, it made me laugh.
'miniature dinosaurs could be helpful,
but also...dangerous!'
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2. Don't ever go onto Newgrounds again, for your entire life... you suck.
3. You suck.
a bit long, but pretty funny
it was good, but I stopped it just after the part with the face punching.
that was funny....yes...
it was good
I liked it.
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